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A Tunnel Of LightWritten by: Aimee As I look at the stars above Thinking about my life I might make the first cut With this silver knife People ask me why I'm like this And I don't know why Someone drove me to it Last time I'll ever cry Reflecting on years gone by Thinking about what went wrong What triggered it off Was a love long gone I never knew What happed between us I felt like dying Realising I must I tried to be strong Wanting to fight But now I'm walking Towards the light (p.s. use it if you want)
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| Cinderluv 2002-04-26 07:00AM | |
| This poem was terrific! The stanza form was great the the effort as well..expecially the rhyme and emotions put into it. Really remarkable... a must read. | |
| honeybaby_05 2002-08-06 07:00AM | |
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The poem was great. You can really feel the pain of the love that was lost. Sad though that this person takes their life. --------------------- Honeybaby_05 | |
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