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Broken HeartWritten by: shirleym She sits and stares Those beautiful tears rolling by; Little did she realize that she was in a world where nobody bothers - where nobody cares; she sits and watches: what else is she expected to do? Her precious world was being torn down, her country, her people too Yet nobody cared Nobody gave a damn; Not one gave a backward glance As she stood there staring - Her fragile heart now broken into two.
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| elektra 2001-09-23 09:00AM |  |
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Kindda short...Like.. short in the sense that I did not get to view the big picture...just little snippets. --------------------- ~There is no worst act than to hate when you dislike being hated.~ | |
| Aimee 2002-08-23 09:00AM | |
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I could feel pain, but as it was said earlier the whole picture has not been played for us as readers to feel the vision behind the poem --------------------- | |
| JAZZ 2002-09-14 09:00AM |  |
| very effective for its lenght, though in my view it could be built on. | |
| millylover 2006-12-05 09:03PM | No Rating |
no one can stand against heart broken. it takes a long ass time to be heal. is a pain that start from your mind because u think about that shut thus going on and what really happen to u. u can risk ur life because of this. the only one who can bring it back is the one who tear it apart, the one u love most, the one who put spoon in ur mouth, and also keep praying to ur God. | |
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