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  • Ashes

    Written by: gantoris

    My lips so tainted In the blood they tasted. Created in the mists of time I stand naked in the moonlight, Skin glistening in the moist morning air.

    Once the king of dragons, Usurper of a thousand nations. A god amongst the mortals, Now it all lies in ashes, Wind blowing the dirt gently away.

    The world changed, As did I, the world I knew, Is nought but a mirage A fragment of my past, Now I cower from the night.

    I fear for the ashes may return, And bring forth the final blow, Ashes of crimson and blue, Powers unmatched hide within them Power to run my blood cold.

    I join the beggars and the homeless, Hiding from the ashes, Hoping for a chance of forgiveness. Can the god Yahweh be so cruel? So merciless on those he loves?

    Oh I wish to return to the ashes. Became dead again, no longer feel the fear, The wrath of god, Has my god deserted me? And left me in the ashes?


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    User Comments

    shellyshelly
    2001-05-20 07:00AM
    1 out of 5
    I'm sorry, I'm feeling quite harsh and critical this evening, but this is so cliche'd and so boring!

    was this inspired by, like, every sci-fi fantasy ever? it sounds like it.

    OK, it does seem like the writer can write, it's technically a 'good' poem, but the cheesy subject matter really ruins it.
     
    elektra
    2001-09-23 07:00AM
    3 out of 5
    Kinda good...but...seems like a poem written by someone who is much engrossed in the world of fantasy...not that it is wrong, but i am someone who prefers a real life kind of thing..

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    ~There is no worst act than to hate when you dislike being hated.~
     
    JAZZ
    2002-09-15 07:00AM
    4 out of 5
    Correct me if im wrong but im guessing there is more than fantisy and sci-fi in this poem. Using the name Yahweh, kinda pionts to that direction. let me know
     

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