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RapedWritten by: Unregistered I know about things I shouldn't know about. Things most people dont know about, and dont want to. Rape. A word that haunts many. A year ago, I was at a party with my best friend. We were drunk, apperntly she was more than I. I wanted to leave, I didn't want to go without her though. But, she wanted to stay with her new boy friend. So I left. I walked the 4 miles home, drunk. From what I heard, after I left, she did the same... with her new guy. Everything I say is both speculation and fact. She drove him home, they took a detour to a field where you can see everything from, it was late, so they decided to sit in a tree and watch the sun rise. Moments later he managed to get her down and lay in the grass, to look at the stars. After that, I can only guess. Because she was found days later naked, with cuts abd bruises, and her clothes all over the field. My best friend was raped and murdered.
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| Charlie999 2001-05-29 07:00AM |  |
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Whoa! I feel bad for her. This teaches a very important lesson. People should know about this. --------------------- Charlie Jin New York City yilongjin@hotmail.com Peaze Out! | |
| hello6am 2001-09-18 07:00AM |  |
| that's seriously powerful... | |
| Duchess1013 2001-12-09 05:00AM | |
| Very interesting. Rape is something people don't like to discuss, but hopefully this will make people more aware. | |
| laprunner 2001-12-19 05:00AM | |
| Very powerful! | |
| Mikhail 2002-05-25 07:00AM | |
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Unfortunately, I couldn`t find much "powerful" things in here but the idea you tried to show us is very understandable. --------------------- Sometimes I wonder who am I to judge... | |
| Lili_Foxy 2002-09-03 07:00AM |  |
| Very powerful, short and sweet. i love it | |
| Psycho 2002-10-17 07:00AM | No Rating |
| Short,strong and coincise.A big example of good writing. | |
| rolly 2002-10-29 05:00AM | |
| PERMANENCE IS A CONCEPT THAT PEOPLE BELIEVE IN BECAUSE IT IS TOO HARD TOO BELIEVE THINGS WILL CHANGE. ONE BAD DECISION AND A PERSON CAN PAY WITH THEIR LIFE. I HAVE SEEN THIS AND CAN TOTALLY UNDERSTAND WHAT SHE MEANS. | |
| Smiley2003cs 2002-11-07 05:00AM | |
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This was written beautifully... extravegant work... Short with a strong since of feeling... thank you for sharing your story!... Jess --------------------- | |
| ishmeal_18 2002-11-26 05:00AM |  |
I think that the idea is good-compacting an obviosly immoral action into few words-but the delivary takes away from the event. Poor word choice-the writter tells rather than shows the feeling behind the experiance-good effort, if that. | |
| aceofspadez989 2002-12-03 05:00AM | |
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might as well post some pictures too. Make it more explicit!!!!! | |
| aznd3m0n246 2006-01-10 05:19PM |  |
| i do not noe whether or not this is true. i could probably write something saying how my best friend kill my girfriend over some stuff. No proff!!! | |
| Locke 2006-03-19 02:23PM | |
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Not only is this too short to be a legitimate essay, it isn't even an essay. It feels like one of those stupid chain letters that you send to people. You apparently have not passed a 1st grade English class, in which you would learn how to spell complicated words such as "and," and "apparently." You also would have learned how to correctly use complicated grammatical symbols such as a comma or a period. And the saddest part is that all these stupid people go for the bait and congratulate you... | |
| dreamingtrees 2006-05-30 02:06AM | No Rating |
| Completely agree......do a spell check next time. And it does feel like a chain letter....I'm surprised it didn't say "send this to 70 people in the next 40 seconds or the same thing will happen to you." But seriously, if that is, as you say, 'fact', why would anybody drive their boyfriend home, drunk? Or walk 4 miles drunk? These things happen, my dear, so let your stupidity be a warning to any other idiot who not only endanger their own lives, but others, by driving/walking home from a party wasted. | |
| Akeisha 2006-06-21 09:28AM | |
| I think this a powerfull essay. The message you deliver is one that is not told enough....true it is lacking in a true fullness we are used to seeing in an "essay" and it may have done you some good to use the spell check feature, but mostly it isn't even about the little things cause in the end it's the big picture you wanted us to see...right? and we did. True or not thanks for the message! | |
| wootwoot 2006-11-11 05:36PM | |
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What the hell is this crap? Anyone that wants to talk about a personal experience with rape can write better than this. There is absolutely no detail and no description. Just some random person claiming that her friend was raped. Great... | |
| kingpin07 2006-12-14 01:16PM | No Rating |
I feel sorry for your friend... i really do... but if you really cared...your essay would be longer..more descriptive.. it would tell her story..make her be mourned..and have some feelnig behind it. | |
| glass 2007-02-02 12:43PM | No Rating |
| hahahha bitch deserves it for drinking | |
| glass 2007-02-02 12:43PM | No Rating |
hahahha bitch deserves it for drinking | |
| rizzy81 2007-03-09 03:20AM | No Rating |
Your friend firstly is wrong to drive whilst under the influence of alcohol, do you know how many deaths are caused through drink driving Secondly meeting a random guy in some party and going off with him is wrong because you dont know him and hence in this case he was a rapist/murderer. Let this be a lesson for others. I hope they find the guy and chop his penis off and stick it up his arse. | |
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